Chapter One Rough Draft, Part Two

with so much that is working, and so much that isn't

I love the Paris drawings; I love the drawing of Jim and me with Lucy at the end (although Jim had enormous difficulty recognizing Lucy’s hat; I should have skipped drawing the monkey applique). I do not love the boy/girl fairytale.

But here it is. I would, again, love to hear what works for you and what doesn’t.